Hitori-Toma's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PSM2: Wrong Address]

Good Short.

I can't find anything wrong with this. The audio might have something to be desired, but other than that, everything's great. 5 stars, man!

[- The Fruit Bowl -]

Surprisingly enjoyable.

For a second once I saw the first part, I was thinking that I'd be blamming this movie. This is actually pretty good: few people can pull off making simplistic-looking fruit and vegetables funny. I salute you, man.

[Chillz Story]

Great, but it's too long.

It was wonderful, and I'm telling the truth. I'm giving you perfect marks. However, the flash exceeds the 5 mb upload limit. It's good that I'm the first (hopefully) to review you, so I say to you now: delete it and cut it into parts before resubmitting it. I don't such a good flash to be blammed.

[WBS'DDay]

A nice retelling of someone's experence from WWII.

For a short animation, that was pretty good. Points for graphics; It's a select few that have the gift of drawing. The sound gives a nice irony to something like this, showing us kind of like how pointless the war was. I can go further by saying we can apply that to the flash itself: short and without plot, just like the war.

Hope you make more.

[Dead Part 1]

A promising start to a flash horror series.

I really enjoyed that short animation. I understand that it's only the beginning of more episodes, and I'll keep that into mind while reviewing.

The look and feel of your drawings are pretty good. Although they could be worked on, I liked it.

The tweens seem monotonous and don't have the right human motion.

There seems to be a lack of audio. Maybe some low-key BG Music and moans from the zombies would do the trick.

The psuedo-camera angles are great. A bit of polishing that skill and it would be perfect.

Good movie. Hope to see more.

JimmySavage responds:

I know what you mean. I never liked tweens in the first place. I'll have a lot more frame by frame in future shorts and tweens won't be as stiff. Thanks for the input!

[Twas a parody b4 xmas]

Not bad, especially since you're using MMD's work.

Good work on this flash. Besides the graphics, everything was actually pretty good. I particularly enjoyed the background, plus the fact that you got one of MMD's songs into it and made it sound good, too. :)

Keep it up. Gave ya a 4/5.

[Valentine Card]

My rival as the best flash to use MMD's music. :)

Hey there. I just wanna let you know that we're fellow flash artists using the same musician's music. And I hope you idolize it as much as me. XD

Anyway, it's a nice short. Though the music takes up a lot of the space and doesn't quite fit into the card's theme, I liked it. :)