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As usual, excellent.

I really do applaud your ability to put depth into each song you make. Awe-inspiring and breath-taking are some of the few words I have for this song, along with all others. I especially like the guitar in this one. Thanks for sharing your songs to Newgrounds, MMD. =)

MilkMan-Dan responds:

In short... thankyou for leaving many reviews. :) I read them all u know.

Nees improvement; Otherwise, enchanting.

I can hear in some parts that you seemed to get your fingers twisted. ^.^ Though, like I say in all of my reviews of your songs, it's great. It matches my taste of deep songs. This one must have a minor scale to it too, right?

PS: I know I don't give you as much praise or inspiring words as others who I've read reviewed you, but I still hope my criticism will be useful.

A little strong, but otherwise good.

I just have to say this, and I hope you don't take offense, but you honestly were playing a little too harshly at the beginning. Also, throughout the entirety of the song, you more or less maintained that strength. It would have been nice if you toned yourself down a bit in some parts, 'specially the start. Otherwise, yet another good piece.

MilkMan-Dan responds:

... you know... many of my friends call this their favourite piece. I personally don't see it. I know what you mean with the harsh playing... I don't like it. I'd like to perhaps re-write it someday. But we will see. Thankyou for your critique it's always appriciated.

Again, refreshing.

Another great piece from you. It's similar to In the Open in the way it was played and the feeling I got from it.

MilkMan-Dan responds:

... In the Open and River of Eden were writting with days of eachother... so it's not unlikely that the style and feeling would be similar. Between you and me... I love this piece with a passion ;).

Refreshing

The way the song is played, it really gives me that sorts of feeling. Something like hope over the horizon. Good song, MMD.

MilkMan-Dan responds:

There is always hope. And I hope you enjoyed this. btw... it took me a while to figure out that MMD stood for Milkman_Dan... clearly... I'm retarded.

Simplicity is a virtue.

First, let me say what I've come to say: please simplify your song. The thing with the xylophone, when it come to the second line and starts adding tons of extra notes, doesn't really sound good for your Elevator Theme. In fact, this might be why people think it sounds like a James Bond tune. Hope you don't take offense.

I personally think it sounds fairly original. Though it takes its theme from common category of tunes, you make a good twist of it. It's just an elevator tune, though, so low scores for diversity. It should be that way, too. =) Perfect marks for clarity of the song and the effort you put into it. I also gave a pretty good Overall score. Besides the criticism I gave you in the first paragraph, it was all good. You rock! XD

Khuskan responds:

I Must have got carried away, i'll have to remember to invent a time machine to go back to 2005 and fix it :D

I'm just a kid at heart with a hope to show everyone my dreams.

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De La Salle University

Manila, Philippines

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