Simplicity is a virtue.
First, let me say what I've come to say: please simplify your song. The thing with the xylophone, when it come to the second line and starts adding tons of extra notes, doesn't really sound good for your Elevator Theme. In fact, this might be why people think it sounds like a James Bond tune. Hope you don't take offense.
I personally think it sounds fairly original. Though it takes its theme from common category of tunes, you make a good twist of it. It's just an elevator tune, though, so low scores for diversity. It should be that way, too. =) Perfect marks for clarity of the song and the effort you put into it. I also gave a pretty good Overall score. Besides the criticism I gave you in the first paragraph, it was all good. You rock! XD